Thursday 22 November 2012

Bachpan mai kuch to baat hai...........

Aao tumhe lekar chalu bachpan ki kuch yaado mai,
 jo sayad gum ho gai hai in sehero ke sannato mai,
yaad karo  jab sara sansar hota tha maa ki pyaar bhari bahoo mai, 
 yaad karo jb asmaan chune ki chahat thi in nanni si nigaho mai 

 hamare sapno mai taare tod kar laane ki jaan hoti thi,
 honslo mai asmaan chune ki udaan hoti thi
 mitti se sapno ke mahal khud banaya karte the
 khagaj ke panno se hawai jahaj udaya krte the 

rote bilbilaate scl jaya krte the,
dusro ke bagicho mai jaane se darte the,
per jaamphal khaane ke liye kuch bi kr gujarte the,
vo din kitne acche the, vo din kitne acche the


jb baarish ka mausam aata tha,
 pura gang galiyo ke chakkar lagte tha,
nadiyo mai hamare bhi jahaj dauda krte the,
kichad mai koodne mai bi sharam nhi karte the,
aur vo kichad ke daag bi kitne acche the 

khel khel mai doctor ban jaya karte the
ek choclate ke liye saare dost marte the
patang ko suraj tak pahuchane ki chahat thi
us bachpan mai kuch to baat thi kuch to baat thi........... 




22 comments:

  1. awesme bhai..very sw8 poem..:D :D

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  2. wen beginnin z so gud can expect a bright future in dis..:P
    simply fabbbb!!

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  3. niceeeeeeeeeeeeee one dude......

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  4. Inspirational! Go ahead! Write more :)

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  5. hey that was a nice try. .. for first time....
    go ahead, all the very best, can make more intresting by writing on current topics...
    (@_@)d.

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  6. nyccc lines keep it up :):)

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  7. awesome work guys.....

    thanks arushi for making me read this

    :-)

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  8. Nice one !!! Bachpan ki yaad aa gayi :)

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  9. its good one..!! ..:)

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  10. You evidently have a flair for writing...hope the string of this art of yours continues so that we can get to read many more such wonderful poems:-)!!!

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    1. Thnks Shreya.... :)
      Sure u'll get to read mch bettr poems provided we get constant support of our frens... :)

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